Want the chance to revise your query and get another round of eyes on it? This two-pass option gives you deeper support, more clarity, and the chance to apply feedback and fine-tune your pitch before sending it out.
You'll receive thoughtful, professional feedback twice: once on your first draft and again after you've had a chance to revise. Includes in-line comments on both drafts for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance, plus short summary notes each round.
You’ll receive:
Two full rounds of professional edits on your query letter.
In-line comments and short summary notes for each round to guide your revisions.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround time for each round after you submit your pages.
This is for you if:
You’re ready to dig deep and make your query sing (but don’t want to do it alone).
You want a second opinion after applying notes (not just a one-and-done read).
You’re gearing up to query (and want to feel unshakably confident).
Please note that this must be redeemed by January 1, 2027.
Want the chance to revise your query and get another round of eyes on it? This two-pass option gives you deeper support, more clarity, and the chance to apply feedback and fine-tune your pitch before sending it out.
You'll receive thoughtful, professional feedback twice: once on your first draft and again after you've had a chance to revise. Includes in-line comments on both drafts for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance, plus short summary notes each round.
You’ll receive:
Two full rounds of professional edits on your query letter.
In-line comments and short summary notes for each round to guide your revisions.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround time for each round after you submit your pages.
This is for you if:
You’re ready to dig deep and make your query sing (but don’t want to do it alone).
You want a second opinion after applying notes (not just a one-and-done read).
You’re gearing up to query (and want to feel unshakably confident).
Please note that this must be redeemed by January 1, 2027.
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