Query Critique (Two Passes)
Want the chance to revise your query and get another round of eyes on it? This two-pass option gives you deeper support, more clarity, and the chance to apply feedback and fine-tune your pitch before sending it out.
You'll receive thoughtful, professional feedback twice: Once on your first draft and again after you've had a chance to revise. Includes in-line comments on both drafts for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance, plus short summary notes each round.
Submit your first draft by: August 15, 2025
Receive your first critique by: September 1, 2025
Submit your revised query by: September 15, 2025
Receive your second critique by: October 1, 2025
This is for you if:
You’re ready to dig deep and make your query sing (but don’t want to do it alone).
You want a second opinion after applying notes (not just a one-and-done read).
You’re gearing up to query this fall (and want to feel unshakably confident).
Here’s What to Know Before Claiming Your Spot:
All critique purchases are final. No refunds will be issued once a spot is claimed. These offerings are intentionally limited and time-bound to protect both your energy and mine. Please submit materials by the listed deadlines and schedule any 1:1 strategy sessions by October 15, 2025. If you’re unable to meet the timeline, I’ll do my best to accommodate, but I can’t guarantee rescheduling after that date.
Want the chance to revise your query and get another round of eyes on it? This two-pass option gives you deeper support, more clarity, and the chance to apply feedback and fine-tune your pitch before sending it out.
You'll receive thoughtful, professional feedback twice: Once on your first draft and again after you've had a chance to revise. Includes in-line comments on both drafts for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance, plus short summary notes each round.
Submit your first draft by: August 15, 2025
Receive your first critique by: September 1, 2025
Submit your revised query by: September 15, 2025
Receive your second critique by: October 1, 2025
This is for you if:
You’re ready to dig deep and make your query sing (but don’t want to do it alone).
You want a second opinion after applying notes (not just a one-and-done read).
You’re gearing up to query this fall (and want to feel unshakably confident).
Here’s What to Know Before Claiming Your Spot:
All critique purchases are final. No refunds will be issued once a spot is claimed. These offerings are intentionally limited and time-bound to protect both your energy and mine. Please submit materials by the listed deadlines and schedule any 1:1 strategy sessions by October 15, 2025. If you’re unable to meet the timeline, I’ll do my best to accommodate, but I can’t guarantee rescheduling after that date.
Want the chance to revise your query and get another round of eyes on it? This two-pass option gives you deeper support, more clarity, and the chance to apply feedback and fine-tune your pitch before sending it out.
You'll receive thoughtful, professional feedback twice: Once on your first draft and again after you've had a chance to revise. Includes in-line comments on both drafts for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance, plus short summary notes each round.
Submit your first draft by: August 15, 2025
Receive your first critique by: September 1, 2025
Submit your revised query by: September 15, 2025
Receive your second critique by: October 1, 2025
This is for you if:
You’re ready to dig deep and make your query sing (but don’t want to do it alone).
You want a second opinion after applying notes (not just a one-and-done read).
You’re gearing up to query this fall (and want to feel unshakably confident).
Here’s What to Know Before Claiming Your Spot:
All critique purchases are final. No refunds will be issued once a spot is claimed. These offerings are intentionally limited and time-bound to protect both your energy and mine. Please submit materials by the listed deadlines and schedule any 1:1 strategy sessions by October 15, 2025. If you’re unable to meet the timeline, I’ll do my best to accommodate, but I can’t guarantee rescheduling after that date.