Your query gets them interested. Your first chapter seals the deal.
Your opening pages are doing a lot of heavy lifting. They have to carry your voice, your tone, your world, all while convincing someone they’re in good hands.
This two-pass critique gives you professional feedback on your first chapter, space to revise, and a second round of eyes on the result. You’ll get clarity not just on what’s working or missing, but whether your revision actually lands.
This option is designed for writers who want their opening chapter to truly deliver—on voice, tension, and story promise.
You’ll receive:
In-line comments and edits on your first chapter.
Suggestions for sharpening tension, voice, and worldbuilding early on.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround from the date you submit your materials to me.
A second round of feedback after you revise.
This is for you if:
You know your story is strong, but you’re not sure your opening’s pulling its weight.
You want clear, honest feedback you can trust, and the chance to prove you can revise.
You’re tired of getting vague passes and ready to make every page earn its place.
Please note that this must be redeemed by January 1, 2027.
Your query gets them interested. Your first chapter seals the deal.
Your opening pages are doing a lot of heavy lifting. They have to carry your voice, your tone, your world, all while convincing someone they’re in good hands.
This two-pass critique gives you professional feedback on your first chapter, space to revise, and a second round of eyes on the result. You’ll get clarity not just on what’s working or missing, but whether your revision actually lands.
This option is designed for writers who want their opening chapter to truly deliver—on voice, tension, and story promise.
You’ll receive:
In-line comments and edits on your first chapter.
Suggestions for sharpening tension, voice, and worldbuilding early on.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround from the date you submit your materials to me.
A second round of feedback after you revise.
This is for you if:
You know your story is strong, but you’re not sure your opening’s pulling its weight.
You want clear, honest feedback you can trust, and the chance to prove you can revise.
You’re tired of getting vague passes and ready to make every page earn its place.
Please note that this must be redeemed by January 1, 2027.
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