Query Critique (Single Pass)
Attend Unignorable, take what you learn to draft or revise your query, and submit it to me by August 15 for a thoughtful, pro-level critique. You’ll get everything you need to confidently pitch your story, with the safety net of expert feedback after.
Normally, I only offer query support inside high-touch coaching containers. But for this workshop, I’m opening a rare one-off opportunity to get professional feedback without the big package commitment.
You’ll receive a professional edit that doesn’t flatten your voice or make you play it safe. Includes in-line comments on your query letter for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance.
Submit your query by: August 15, 2025
You’ll receive your critique by: September 1, 2025
This is for you if:
You want to know if your query is working (or why it’s not).
You’re tired of contradictory advice and want focused feedback from someone who edits query-ready books for a living.
You don’t want to lose your voice or over-sanitize just to “follow the rules.”
Here’s What to Know Before Claiming Your Spot:
All critique purchases are final. No refunds will be issued once a spot is claimed. These offerings are intentionally limited and time-bound to protect both your energy and mine. Please submit materials by the listed deadlines and schedule any 1:1 strategy sessions by October 15, 2025. If you’re unable to meet the timeline, I’ll do my best to accommodate, but I can’t guarantee rescheduling after that date.
Attend Unignorable, take what you learn to draft or revise your query, and submit it to me by August 15 for a thoughtful, pro-level critique. You’ll get everything you need to confidently pitch your story, with the safety net of expert feedback after.
Normally, I only offer query support inside high-touch coaching containers. But for this workshop, I’m opening a rare one-off opportunity to get professional feedback without the big package commitment.
You’ll receive a professional edit that doesn’t flatten your voice or make you play it safe. Includes in-line comments on your query letter for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance.
Submit your query by: August 15, 2025
You’ll receive your critique by: September 1, 2025
This is for you if:
You want to know if your query is working (or why it’s not).
You’re tired of contradictory advice and want focused feedback from someone who edits query-ready books for a living.
You don’t want to lose your voice or over-sanitize just to “follow the rules.”
Here’s What to Know Before Claiming Your Spot:
All critique purchases are final. No refunds will be issued once a spot is claimed. These offerings are intentionally limited and time-bound to protect both your energy and mine. Please submit materials by the listed deadlines and schedule any 1:1 strategy sessions by October 15, 2025. If you’re unable to meet the timeline, I’ll do my best to accommodate, but I can’t guarantee rescheduling after that date.
Attend Unignorable, take what you learn to draft or revise your query, and submit it to me by August 15 for a thoughtful, pro-level critique. You’ll get everything you need to confidently pitch your story, with the safety net of expert feedback after.
Normally, I only offer query support inside high-touch coaching containers. But for this workshop, I’m opening a rare one-off opportunity to get professional feedback without the big package commitment.
You’ll receive a professional edit that doesn’t flatten your voice or make you play it safe. Includes in-line comments on your query letter for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance.
Submit your query by: August 15, 2025
You’ll receive your critique by: September 1, 2025
This is for you if:
You want to know if your query is working (or why it’s not).
You’re tired of contradictory advice and want focused feedback from someone who edits query-ready books for a living.
You don’t want to lose your voice or over-sanitize just to “follow the rules.”
Here’s What to Know Before Claiming Your Spot:
All critique purchases are final. No refunds will be issued once a spot is claimed. These offerings are intentionally limited and time-bound to protect both your energy and mine. Please submit materials by the listed deadlines and schedule any 1:1 strategy sessions by October 15, 2025. If you’re unable to meet the timeline, I’ll do my best to accommodate, but I can’t guarantee rescheduling after that date.