You’ll receive everything you need to confidently pitch your story, with the safety net of expert feedback before you hit send.
Normally, I only offer query support inside high-touch coaching containers. But I’m opening up this rare, one-off opportunity to get professional feedback without the big package commitment.
You’ll receive:
A professional edit that doesn’t flatten your voice or make you play it safe.
In-line comments on your query letter for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround from the date you submit your materials to me.
This is for you if:
You want to know if your query is working (or why it’s not).
You’re tired of contradictory advice and want focused feedback from someone who edits query-ready books for a living.
You don’t want to lose your voice or over-sanitize just to “follow the rules.”
Please note that your critique must be redeemed by January 1st, 2027.
You’ll receive everything you need to confidently pitch your story, with the safety net of expert feedback before you hit send.
Normally, I only offer query support inside high-touch coaching containers. But I’m opening up this rare, one-off opportunity to get professional feedback without the big package commitment.
You’ll receive:
A professional edit that doesn’t flatten your voice or make you play it safe.
In-line comments on your query letter for clarity, structure, and emotional resonance.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround from the date you submit your materials to me.
This is for you if:
You want to know if your query is working (or why it’s not).
You’re tired of contradictory advice and want focused feedback from someone who edits query-ready books for a living.
You don’t want to lose your voice or over-sanitize just to “follow the rules.”
Please note that your critique must be redeemed by January 1st, 2027.
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