Your query gets them interested. Your first chapter seals the deal.
Your opening pages are doing a lot of heavy lifting. They have to carry your voice, your tone, your world, all while convincing someone they’re in good hands.
You’ll receive a professional edit on your novel’s first chapter, with thoughtful in-line comments focused on clarity, emotional impact, and narrative momentum. I'll offer feedback on how the chapter reads and ensure it hooks the reader from page one.
You’ll receive:
In-line comments and edits on your first chapter.
Suggestions for sharpening tension, voice, and worldbuilding early on.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround from the date you submit your materials to me.
This is for you if:
You’ve got a solid query, but your pages aren’t landing the way you want them to.
You want to make sure your opening hooks an agent immediately.
You’re tired of vague critique and want honest, actionable insight from someone who knows what makes agents keep reading.
Please note that all materials must be submitted and your package redeemed by January 1, 2027.
Your query gets them interested. Your first chapter seals the deal.
Your opening pages are doing a lot of heavy lifting. They have to carry your voice, your tone, your world, all while convincing someone they’re in good hands.
You’ll receive a professional edit on your novel’s first chapter, with thoughtful in-line comments focused on clarity, emotional impact, and narrative momentum. I'll offer feedback on how the chapter reads and ensure it hooks the reader from page one.
You’ll receive:
In-line comments and edits on your first chapter.
Suggestions for sharpening tension, voice, and worldbuilding early on.
A guaranteed 2-week turnaround from the date you submit your materials to me.
This is for you if:
You’ve got a solid query, but your pages aren’t landing the way you want them to.
You want to make sure your opening hooks an agent immediately.
You’re tired of vague critique and want honest, actionable insight from someone who knows what makes agents keep reading.
Please note that all materials must be submitted and your package redeemed by January 1, 2027.
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